At first she was unsure whether she wanted the abortion or not she felt as though if she gets the abortion her life would be a lot easier so she can live a better life and leave the relationship behind. She felt as though if she got the abortion things would go back to the way they were, or if she kept the baby she would have lost the relationship with her husband. It all started in the last week of August just before I started going to school I received a text message from my boyfriend. It said that we need to talk an I replied ok. Whenever I get a text like that it never anything good, but I just dealt with it anyway. I already knew he wanted to break up with me, when I wanted to call the relationship off he didn't want me to leave him. So I approached his house the fence is green and the grass is well cut with stones surrounding the front lawn a nice cozy bench on the right side of the lawn a little cobblestone walk way to get to the door, as I walk up to the door he opens it but the look on his face when he saw me didn't look happy he looked like as if he was disappointed, sad and hurt as I walk into the house we are in the inside porch there is a champagne colored coffee table and an antiue wooden rocking chair and a white bookshelf with years of being worn out and old TV inside of it lined up with VCR's and books underneath it with a glass slide able doors. There were four salon chairs with multi-colored flower patterns I took a seat in one of the salon chairs sat back and looked up at his facial expresion he look as though as if he was thinking about what he's going to say but took his time thinking about it while im sitting in the chair looking through the window across from i can see cars speed by people walking and see the entire front lawn as all of this is happening i completely spaced out of realality for a quick moment until i heard him start talking he said "I see that you finally got yourself together I finally realized that im your obstacle i was the one preventing you for a brighter future i want you to finish school and become a nurse my mom and sister can help you out when it comes to studing and i can help you with your bus fair" and i said "you're not the obstacle your actions are the obstacles how you treat me now is the full reason why i wanted to end the relationship in the first place you treated me like i was your personal whore instead of your girlfriend i only put up with your shit because i cared about you if i didn't care i would of left you along time ago but i gave myself a benefit of doubt i thought you would realize that you have a great women by your side but i realize my worth so im glad that you ended this" At first i wanted to slap the shit out of him for what he said then i thought about it that was just me being angry i learned that i had no choice but to get over it and accept it in due time I'll get over it i'd rather love myself then to be in love with a man that treats me like a whore and continue to live my life until the right one actually comes into my life and not waste my time and play with my emotions.
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9/29/2017 02:41:04 am
Jeanetta, I found your narrative argument to be extremely vague. Even your introduction seemed to lack some necessary details, like what their decision is based on. Your argument itself has some other details that I wasn't sure about. Did the story say that the man was the girl's husband? Also, you jump straight in and say "she" but do not give an explaination as to who "she" is. I also finished reading, not really knowing what you believe happened to Jig and the American man.
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Jeanetta Duncan
10/1/2017 01:03:14 pm
thanks i kinda did a rush job on the summary but my narrative i actually took the time out and write it how i visualied the situation and i really tried to write it out how i felt about the situation
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Jesse Coffman
10/2/2017 02:00:41 pm
Jeanetta, the imagery in your narrative was really good, while reading it I could actually picture what you were talking about and I think it added a lot to the story.
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10/3/2017 05:12:14 am
Jeanetta, I am so happy that you realized your self worth! I really like how you used descriptive language it helped paint a picture of the house and the scenery. Thanks for sharing your story!
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Jeanetta Duncan
10/3/2017 05:18:12 am
thank you Casey Green! I try my best I feel like I write better based on my emotions
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